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Author Gold's avatar

I appreciate this post, because I see many writers on Substack, especially new accounts, who have not gone through this process. And I do agree it really does make a difference for attracting your readers and growing your subscriber base.

I have a question for you, how would you recommend a Substack writer address this topic when they write fiction, or they are an illustrator, or simply writing their autobiography or short stories or poems? How can they share how they help people through their writings?

Jess, The Creator's avatar

so far, I think:

Fiction doesn’t teach. It changes how people feel, think, and see themselves.

That’s the outcome.

Simple Formula for Fiction Writers

Give them this:

I help [reader] feel/experience/see [specific emotional or mental outcome] through [type of writing].

Author Gold's avatar

Thank you Jess!

I see many writers struggle with their short descriptions when they see themselves as as purely creative writers/authors (and not creating content to teach or sell directly).

Jess, The Creator's avatar

My bad I’m going to DM you now

Jess, The Creator's avatar

its the whole positioning statement of the publication so its super important!

what is the outcome for your reader?

why are you sharing your fiction stories with your readers?

are you teaching them how to write fiction?

what do readers get by subscribing to your page?

you need a clear offer

Author Gold's avatar

Wonderful! I’ve shared your post with my Subscribers, and suggest they go through and update.

I’m going to take a look at mine too!

Jess, The Creator's avatar

Thank you for sharing my work!!!

Jess, The Creator's avatar

Even if you’re writing fiction or creative work, you’re still helping the reader—you’re just doing it emotionally instead of instructionally.

Instead of describing what you write, describe what your reader experiences.

For example: not “I write short stories,” but “I write stories that help people feel less alone,” or “stories that stay with you.”

Think in terms of feeling, perspective, or transformation—that’s where the value is.

Jess, The Creator's avatar

thank you!! let me know if you need help.

Jess, The Creator's avatar

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Bhupal Maruchettty's avatar

This post helped me alot ☺️✨

Thank you Jess for sharing this detailed information on importace of right substack description.

Jess, The Creator's avatar

hi, Bhupal!! I'm so glad this point helped you a lot!

the publication description is super important.

I'm always happy to help, DM me whenever!!

Bhupal Maruchettty's avatar

Yes Jess, I have understood this lately.

Thank you so much 😊

Jess, The Creator's avatar

Great!! I’m glad it was simple to follow!

Jen Chapin's avatar

This was so helpful! Here's what I changed mine to. Feedback welcome!

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Jess, The Creator's avatar

Perfect!! Now make sure to update that on your About page and welcome email to the free subs too.

Let's Get Clear's avatar

A great article. Clarity is heavily underestimated. It is no longer a luxury, but a necessity- a capability that needs to be built in this chaotic world.

I hope you can join me in spreading a clarity movement.

Jess, The Creator's avatar

i’m in!!

a clarity movement is so needed.

thank you so much for reading my work!!